This post shows a print screen of comments made from my fellow students on my magazine page. Also next to it i have written a paragraph about what i will change and my thoughts on the comments made.

Through these comments i don't think that i will be changing much when creating my final double page spread because from the comments it seems as though most elements on this page work well. My images show continuity and clearly link to the other pages considering they are of the same model which is featured in the article, which is clear to read given the neat column format i have chosen to use. The main image i have used contains good composition and is a natural image reflecting the music artists character. Also, i could possibly include another quote as this will give the reader some information about the article and make them want to know even more.