This post shows a print screen of comments made from my fellow students on my magazine page. Also next to it i have written a paragraph about what i will change and my thoughts on the comments made.

Through these comments i don't think that i will be changing much when creating my final double page spread because from the comments it seems as though most elements on this page work well. My images show continuity and clearly link to the other pages considering they are of the same model which is featured in the article, which is clear to read given the neat column format i have chosen to use. The main image i have used contains good composition and is a natural image reflecting the music artists character. Also, i could possibly include another quote as this will give the reader some information about the article and make them want to know even more.

This post shows a print screen of comments made from my fellow students on my magazine page. Also underneath it i have written a paragraph about what i will change and my thoughts on the comments made.

 

The comments recieved on this page are both positive and negative too. It ensures me that the colour scheme works well considering it is consistent and has continuity because it is the same to the front cover, therefore they link together. When creating my final contents page i will try to include apps such as, twitter, facebook, etc. This would be another way to advertise the magazine and encourage people to purchase it if they see it every so often. I will be keeping the type of font i have used as the feedback i recieved mentioned that it was clear and easy to read. Also, i could include another image when making my final. This would make the page look slightly more busy and refer to what is featured in the rest of the magazine.



This post shows a print screen of comments made from my fellow students on my magazine page. Also next to it i have written a paragraph about what i will change and my thoughts on the comments made.

The comments on my front cover page are both positive and negative. Certain comments depend on the readers view of magazine layout or colour schemes. I will take these comments into consideration when i create my final, such as enlarging the masthead to stand out further to the reader. Some of the text could work better in a smaller font, therefore reinforcing the most important texts and the main sell line. I will need to add a magazine website, this will help my magazine popularity as there is more than one way you could view it.

Mise en scene

This post shows the mise-en-scene used in my magazine. From the images i have used throughout my magazine, i have explained why i used specific aspects which link to mise-en-scene.

Audience Profile

This post shows the results from the poll on my blog. Also from the results i have commented on what i think of them and how i will link them into my magazine, and how i will use them during the making of it.Audience profile powerpoint

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Moodboard: This post shows images which i feel would relate to my magazine, and reflects the theme of my magazine.