This post shows a print screen of comments made from my fellow students on my magazine page. Also underneath it i have written a paragraph about what i will change and my thoughts on the comments made.

 

The comments recieved on this page are both positive and negative too. It ensures me that the colour scheme works well considering it is consistent and has continuity because it is the same to the front cover, therefore they link together. When creating my final contents page i will try to include apps such as, twitter, facebook, etc. This would be another way to advertise the magazine and encourage people to purchase it if they see it every so often. I will be keeping the type of font i have used as the feedback i recieved mentioned that it was clear and easy to read. Also, i could include another image when making my final. This would make the page look slightly more busy and refer to what is featured in the rest of the magazine.