This post shows a print screen of comments made from my fellow students on my magazine page. Also next to it i have written a paragraph about what i will change and my thoughts on the comments made.

The comments on my front cover page are both positive and negative. Certain comments depend on the readers view of magazine layout or colour schemes. I will take these comments into consideration when i create my final, such as enlarging the masthead to stand out further to the reader. Some of the text could work better in a smaller font, therefore reinforcing the most important texts and the main sell line. I will need to add a magazine website, this will help my magazine popularity as there is more than one way you could view it.